3 thoughts on “someone at my door a diliverey man pizza man”
Hi my name is Khorvez. I really like your story.i liked the begging and ending. i really like how you talked about what you were doing and the ending the ending was funny cause you just went back to watching TV. It would be cool if you wrote another story ok bye.
Hi my name is Khorvez. I really like your story.i liked the begging and ending. i really like how you talked about what you were doing and the ending the ending was funny cause you just went back to watching TV. It would be cool if you wrote another story ok bye.
well yea [it to my teacher she is verey nice
ty i know my teacher said im good at writing